Welcome, February, the month romance authors love—because kissing books, of course—and loathe—because of all the stupid “hot takes” written by so-called literary experts who’ve never read a modern romance novel, question why we can’t kill off the lovers at the end, and always mention 50 Shades of Gray and Fabio. Reader, this willful ignorance, misogyny, and disprespect wears on a romance writer’s soul.
Then again, we bring in the lion’s share of fiction sales, so we’ll just boo-hoo all the way to the bank.
It’s time once again for the Insecure Writers Support Group blog hop. The IWSG is a place to find support and solace from your fellow authors in the writing trenches. Come join us! Click on the image to learn more.
The awesome co-hosts for the February 2 posting of the IWSG are Joylene Nowell Butler, Jacqui Murray, Sandra Cox, and Lee Lowery! Be sure to check out their posts.
I’ll skip today’s optional question about supporters we’ve lost. Only three years into my publishing career, I haven’t yet lost any mentors or author friends, thank goodness. Instead, I’d like to share a writing technique that’s been helping me, a Lawful Plantser trying to become a plotter, to increase productivity.
You non-plotters know the feeling: you see The End glimmering on the far horizon, but you’re stuck up to your armpits in quicksand, unsure how to get from Act I to Act III. And that internal editor! Mine’s a real tyrant.
Some tell us to just write the first draft without stopping to research or edit–but how? That’s just not how my brain is wired.
Here’s a weird mind trick that’s helped me increase my writing speed and ease. I didn’t create this–in fact, I’ve heard the term “Zero Draft” in several writing workshops. Perhaps it’ll help someone else.
Step One: Detailed character bios for the two protagonists, including each character’s love language, astrological sign, scent, vehicle, occupation, education, family, romantic status, appearance, current situation/outlook, wound, internal conflict, external conflict, inner goals, outer goals, false believe/coping strategy, greatest fear, greatest strength, etc. I love this part. Even more fun–I fill a Pinterest boad with pictures of my characters, their homes, their prized possessions, settings, etc. This helps me tremendously in writing descriptions.
Step Two overlaps Step One. As ideas come to me for possible scenes or even snippets of scenes, I write them down on 3X5 cards and arrange them on my white board, where I’ve written the main story beats. I’m a kinesthetic learner and often get insights by physically moving the cards around. Plus, it’s fun playing with colorful little magnets.
Step Three: On a Word document that also contains the story beats (courtesy of Gwen Hayes’ Romancing the Beat) I start writing a very messy “zero draft” meant for no one’s eyes but mine. Basically a detailed outline, it contains a good bit of dialogue, notes to myself about details to fill in later or research, and questions to ponder as I write the first draft. I type my zero draft in various colors, perhaps 300-500 words per scene, so it’s somewhere between an outline and a draft. As I incorporate the ideas on the index cards, I crumple those suckers and toss them into the trash bin with a victory cry. So satisfying!
I find it so much easier to iron out plot wrinkles in this messy outline/draft hybrid than in the actual first draft. And once it’s done, writing the actual scenes goes so much faster! I just copy/paste each colored scene outline onto a new document, then delete the colored bits once I’ve fleshed them out into proper prose. So much easier than starting with a brief outline and a blank page!
There you have it. I’d love to hear any tricks you have for speeding up the drafting phase.
I wish you happy writing in February, lots of love, and your favorite Valentine’s treats.
Thanks for your tips. I’m a sort of plotter where I plot out the major plot points and figure out the rest as I go. An author recommended Save the Cat Writes a Novel by Jessica Brody that has a good outlining system I’m going to try with my next manuscript.
Hi,
I do detailed character bios and find them extremely helpful but I am not a complete plotter. I think I am a bit of both, panster and plotter. There are times when a chapter or two comes immediately and write what there in my heart.
Wishing you a great day.
Shalom aleichem
Glad it’s helped you get more organized.
I think I’d be a lawful plotter…
Interesting. I’m somewhere between Lawful Planster and Neutral Plotter. I jot the basics about my main characters and those close to them, plus a few names to grab when I need minor characters. I start with a few paragraphs of general plot notes, plug that into a beat sheet, and then flesh out the notes (and delete them) as I write the story. I usually write linear, but will jump forward and write a scene if I’m inspired.
The biggest thing I’ve discovered to speed my writing along has been putting a note to myself in brackets when I get stuck, so I can move on and come back to it later.
I’m definitely a chaotic plantser. I start off with a (very) rough outline, and then start writing interesting scenes (definitely not in order). I then fill in the rest as I go. It seems to be working for me lately. If I plot too much I get bored before I even write the story, and if I pants too much I end up with no coherent story and I basically have to re-write the whole thing.
Never heard of it. Thanks sharing. This could come in very handy. 🙂
Anna from elements of emaginette
I’m probably a chaotic pantser as I can’t even decide where I fall on the chart! lol I know I get ‘ideas’ and then try to smooth out the parts between. And I love using Pinterest to collect ideas for characters looks and places. I’ve even categorized them into the books they fit. 🙂
According to that chart, I’m a Neutral Plotter, which I NEVER would have guessed. I would have said Planster, but that Neutral Plotter is exactly how I write, so I bow to the “experts” haha.
Thanks for stopping by my blog today!
Well this is fun! I’m currently enamored with Save the Cat, so Neutral Plotter seems to fit me. Although if I’m honest, I always revert to Chaotic Panster. Thanks for the tips – I’m always inspired by someone who has actually been there, and done that.